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driving some1 to the edge

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My Dark Reflection

Views (71) Tragedy Created on 2-20-08 Flag

Sitting alone in my room

with a single piece of paper

but nothing to write

as why should i let you know?

you have never cared before

coming down with blood on my shirt

but never once you asked

'where the hell did that blood come from?'

you just sat there drunk 

drinking away all your problems

so i unleash my iner self

the dark side within

flowing out, all that pain

the razor just lying on the floor

it glimers in the light

as my sight begins to fade 

my breath slowing down

as you shout out my name

as i don't answer your call

you storm towards the door

but i'm no longer there

lifelessly laying

with out even a note

your cry and your scream

wondering and pondering

and then suddenly it clicks

as all the abuse and no love

drove me to the edge

as my dark reflection lies in the mirror

you fall to the floor. 

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On March 7th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth This is great, the title itself is pure poetry, but all of it's good.
On February 26th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
liked it a lot!!!
On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao its good 2 of my friends were cutters soo i get a little wigged by the idea of razor blades still good though
On February 23rd 2008 svnna06 Said :
svnna06 Wow. that was pretty good! i liked it alot.
On February 21st 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it!
On February 21st 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Ooo this is GOOD, just hope it is not a preminition of what you are wanting. if it is ..... drop me a message. other wise this is Brilliant, grate word choice!
On February 20th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol Very nice. Other than a few spelling errors, it is really, really good.
On February 20th 2008 icewillow13 Said :
icewillow13 love your word choice!
On February 20th 2008 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 really good job. why always so sad though?
On February 20th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 This is amazing! Nice job!