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driving some1 to the edgeRate this Poem
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Damned are we |
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10
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Death Beckons You |
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7
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Fear for life |
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16
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Abusive love |
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Iner-child Sanctuary |
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Moonlit Stalker |
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Sunrise, Sunset |
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A soldiers dream alone |
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Parallel life |
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Dreams of home |
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Scars on the heart |
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Valentine Poem |
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Was it really worth it |
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To the ppl of the world |
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My Dark Reflection |
My Dark Reflection
Sitting alone in my room
with a single piece of paper
but nothing to write
as why should i let you know?
you have never cared before
coming down with blood on my shirt
but never once you asked
'where the hell did that blood come from?'
you just sat there drunk
drinking away all your problems
so i unleash my iner self
the dark side within
flowing out, all that pain
the razor just lying on the floor
it glimers in the light
as my sight begins to fade
my breath slowing down
as you shout out my name
as i don't answer your call
you storm towards the door
but i'm no longer there
lifelessly laying
with out even a note
your cry and your scream
wondering and pondering
and then suddenly it clicks
as all the abuse and no love
drove me to the edge
as my dark reflection lies in the mirror
you fall to the floor.
| On March 7th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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This is great, the title itself is pure poetry, but all of it's good. |
| On February 26th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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liked it a lot!!! |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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its good 2 of my friends were cutters soo i get a little wigged by the idea of razor blades still good though |
| On February 23rd 2008 svnna06 Said : | |
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Wow. that was pretty good! i liked it alot. |
| On February 21st 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! |
| On February 21st 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Ooo this is GOOD, just hope it is not a preminition of what you are wanting. if it is ..... drop me a message. other wise this is Brilliant, grate word choice! |
| On February 20th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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Very nice. Other than a few spelling errors, it is really, really good. |
| On February 20th 2008 icewillow13 Said : | |
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love your word choice! |
| On February 20th 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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really good job. why always so sad though?
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| On February 20th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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This is amazing! Nice job! |


