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Created on 2-18-08
As light glimmers in my eyes
and the hurt begins to rise to the surface
my scars, visible to you
it's sad, but i can't tell you the truth
that all this time
all my peers beside me,
my heart being the only one not beating
being told that i don't belong
or that i am the strange one
rips another piece of my breaking heart
so i tell myself this
life in the dark is better
as a blood pool lies under my feet
but still i breath
coming home, wishing you have changed
No, your still the same as when i saw you last
so my final words to you shall be
'You didn't care then, so why do you now?
all alone i sat with no one to hold,
so why, why now?'
A thump from the ceiling
as i swing side to side
this is my calling, the only way out.
Please Login to post comments| On March 7th 2008 2543 Said : | |
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this is really good but i hope the suicide thing is a lil creepy! I hope you don't really feel that way |
| On February 28th 2008 Alixthetree Said : | |
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i really really like it...it's very cool!! |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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the suicide thing scares me just a little great poetry but there is always a better way out than suicide just have to find it |
| On February 23rd 2008 jennaferz Said : | |
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thats awesome. =] |
| On February 19th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Intense..I really like it. great choice of words! |
| On February 19th 2008 BOYD13 Said : | |
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its good :] |
| On February 19th 2008 darkmatters Said : | |
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good.
Poems don't need to rhyme, the best ones often don't.
xx |
| On February 19th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Nice really nice!!!!
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| On February 18th 2008 dhmm Said : | |
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llllllllll-ooooooooo-vvvvvvvvvvv-eeeeeeeeeee-dddddddddd it |
| On February 18th 2008 maximusglassiu Said : | |
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I like your poem. It is dark, but it has depth to it which gives it meaning. |
| On February 18th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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reall good :] |
| On February 18th 2008 svnna06 Said : | |
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that was really good. i love it. |
| On February 18th 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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its good i like it..deep |
| On February 18th 2008 Godslildancer Said : | |
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I love your work. It's great. |
| On February 18th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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I think it's great. Without the rhyming, it's still fine! *thumbs up* |
