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Was it really worth it

Views (137) Love Created on 2-15-08 Flag

Lifeless being sitting alone

lifeless being all on their own

no more conflict and no more pain

all the memories have been drained

 

As the world spins around

and darkness sets

your heart beat weakens

this you do not regret

 

All your sins in a note

on top of the dresser

blood droplets, a pool

you are the confesser

 

'A life i could not bare,

so don't cry for me,

your world will be happier,

in time you will see.'

 

No light at the end

just dark surounds

whiperings tears

are your everlasting sound 

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On February 28th 2008 Alixthetree Said :
Alixthetree I
On February 23rd 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 Dude that PWNED. I really liked it.
On February 19th 2008 darkmatters Said :
darkmatters I enjoyed it, flowed nicely. Keep it up mannn, x
On February 16th 2008 2543 Said :
2543 your right...it is kinda emo lol but it's really good!
On February 16th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 *thumbs up* It's great!
On February 16th 2008 dhmm Said :
dhmm AMAZING I LOVE IT WHEN R U GOING TO WRITE SOTHING LIKE THIS AGAIN
On February 16th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord good flow, lovely choice of words all in all a good poem
On February 15th 2008 darkesttears13 Said :
darkesttears13 wow thats rlly good!
On February 15th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it! Great choice of words.
On February 15th 2008 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 i love it alot. really nice work this time. its flowing and natural.
On February 15th 2008 idontmakeusern Said :
idontmakeusern that is awesome u r so gd at writing poetry gd work