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Valentine Poem

Views (333) Love Created on 2-12-08 Flag

We've been together

for so long,

to show my love

i write this song.

My heart races

as you come near,

my eyes glisten

when its your voice i hear.

My legs get weak

as you hold me together,

your hugs and kisses will last forever.

So with this song

i shout out loud,

my love for

makes me so proud. 

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On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao i dont know about saying it needs more content im a huge fan of saying more with less i think sometimes poets get to caught up in what they are saying instead of saying it i prefer the short and simple beautifully written ones like this one
On February 19th 2008 darkmatters Said :
darkmatters As a poem, could have more content and that but as something to say to someone you love it's pretty much perfect, to the point and sweet.
On February 16th 2008 2543 Said :
2543 aaaawwwwwwwww this is really sweet!
On February 15th 2008 vampiressx Said :
vampiressx Very cute poem :)
On February 14th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said :
MyHeartIsAPOW Its soooooo cute! I love it!
On February 14th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
tooo cute
On February 13th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk Love It!!!
On February 13th 2008 idontmakeusern Said :
idontmakeusern it gd gd job
On February 13th 2008 kelleyrey Said :
kelleyrey This is wonderful :) I liked it alot! Thank for sharing this with me :)
On February 12th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol i like it very much. i wish i could say the same for myself but no one could ever love me for me.
On February 12th 2008 lynnlovescodyk Said :
my picture
its just like me and my boyfriend they way i feel about him
On February 12th 2008 Godslildancer Said :
Godslildancer wow, I like it! thanks for asking me to read it ^_^
On February 12th 2008 lapseofreason Said :
my picture
Nice, I like how you don't worry too much about rhyming. :D
On February 12th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic I like!
On February 12th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Nice! very Nice!! Love this!!
On February 12th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Nice job, thanks for sharing this for me.
On February 12th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 cute! very nice! I love it! :)