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A soldiers dream alone
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Created on 2-1-08
Guns blazing
as the sun begins to rise
dawn has set
fear and sorrow fill their eyes
lying with the dead
freinds and fellows alike
stench all around
the sirens and screams the only sound
Letters home,
this thy only comfort
cowardism an opption
but think, what if you were caught?
Music and songs
always in thought
memories of home
still the bullets fly
We are men
and men are we
death overpowers
can no one see
The young and old
lay lifelessly in the trench
no mans land
the horror that will consume
Is the bullet his ticket out
his one way home
all he wants is his family
a soldiers dream alone
Please Login to post comments| On February 9th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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wow thts real good |
| On February 8th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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great job. |
| On February 7th 2008 kelleyrey Said : | |
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so sad but yet so very true , this made me cry :) Good job keep up the great work:) |
| On February 6th 2008 darkmatters Said : | |
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nicely done.
x |
| On February 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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OK!!! who stole my box of tissues!!! really beautifully written!!!!! |
| On February 3rd 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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wonderful job, check my newest plz? |
| On February 3rd 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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wonderful job, check my newest plz? |
| On February 3rd 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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Wonderful, yet emotional! please look at my work. |
| On February 2nd 2008 2543 Said : | |
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this is beautiful
very sad too! |
| On February 1st 2008 RoKkErBiTcH Said : | |
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its really nice i like it alot. alot of emotion ! gj |
| On February 1st 2008 innersmiff Said : | |
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good images and emotions. clumsy rhyming structure. it would be better with some sort of a ring to it you know? |
| On February 1st 2008 vampiressx Said : | |
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Nice work, alot of feeling |
| On February 1st 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Very emotional. Great work! |
