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My Dark Reflection |
Death Beckons You
Sorrow sweeps the eyes
of all people present,
as the light no longer shines
nor does the hope for life
After sitting in torment,
silently in the dark,
A distraught figure approches you
leaving you with a broken heart
Wondering alone,
no one's there
You scream to the heavens
but no one cares
Are you trapped,
in the spirits plain
Blood seeps through
the hole in your brain
You arrive home
it's black and cold,
Tears flow like a river
but there's no one to hold
!SUDENLY!
You recognise
your long gone,
Your body found on the alley way floor
Lifeless mortal, You are no more
| On February 8th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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I like this. The only thing that I would say to improve it is your spelling. If you have such wonderful talent, spelling isn't that big of a deal, but it certainly makes it look more professional. |
| On February 5th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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I like this one, too! You are a great poet. |
| On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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oo nice really nice!! |


