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follow a mans story through death

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Death Beckons You

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Sorrow sweeps the eyes

of all people present,

as the light no longer shines

nor does the hope for life

 

After sitting in torment,

silently in the dark,

A distraught figure approches you

leaving you with a broken heart

 

Wondering alone,

no one's there

You scream to the heavens

but no one cares

 

Are you trapped,

in the spirits plain

Blood seeps through

the hole in your brain

 

You arrive home

it's black and cold,

Tears flow like a river

but there's no one to hold

 

           !SUDENLY!

You recognise 

your long gone,

Your body found on the alley way floor

Lifeless mortal, You are no more

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On February 8th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I like this. The only thing that I would say to improve it is your spelling. If you have such wonderful talent, spelling isn't that big of a deal, but it certainly makes it look more professional.
On February 5th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol I like this one, too! You are a great poet.
On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord oo nice really nice!!