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The Day The Sun Didn't Rise
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Created on 1-14-07
i still remember the day the sun didnt rise...
but i guess it wasnt to long ago...
i still remember the look in your eyes...
and the smell of whiskey on your breath...
little did i know those were my last words to you..
i didnt know that night you would die without a cause..
i wouldve said somethin nicer if i knew...
but we dont pick our destiny
i can only wish you were still here...
but you gave up on life; on me...
and now i open my eyes and no ones there...
i still see the blood on your face...
i can still feel that sting of fear...
i still break down and cry and lose my way...
i read your not over and over again...
to try to find some hope... a reason to go on..
i wish you wouldnt have punished us all for your sins...
but you did.. and now were left to clean up the mess..
whyd you you do it? whyd you leave?
i know im almost an adult.. but i still dont know how to deal with death...
if only i could erase the things i said...
my last words would be
"daddy, i love you."
but i guess it wasnt to long ago...
i still remember the look in your eyes...
and the smell of whiskey on your breath...
little did i know those were my last words to you..
i didnt know that night you would die without a cause..
i wouldve said somethin nicer if i knew...
but we dont pick our destiny
i can only wish you were still here...
but you gave up on life; on me...
and now i open my eyes and no ones there...
i still see the blood on your face...
i can still feel that sting of fear...
i still break down and cry and lose my way...
i read your not over and over again...
to try to find some hope... a reason to go on..
i wish you wouldnt have punished us all for your sins...
but you did.. and now were left to clean up the mess..
whyd you you do it? whyd you leave?
i know im almost an adult.. but i still dont know how to deal with death...
if only i could erase the things i said...
my last words would be
"daddy, i love you."
Please Login to post comments| On February 4th 2007 angelmalvi Said : | |
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that was really good. its so sad. im sorry. |
