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The 16th

Eternity is a far too shortened game
when time is a factor that eats away
Generations bring us forth
the Forgetfulness of names

So little before me so much below me
Remember the wondering of faith
In a conflict,so unaware
As I head on into empty space

the period to make an oath
to ignore limits for a change
Thou shall try,thy has fought
Thou shall never die in a cage

We will live as we lived
In a world of personal dreams
we all give what we have made
bloodless that do not,still bleed

Sail towards the afterlife
at heart with what you cherish
walk among the embraceful night
so that with a smile you may perish
 

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On November 3rd 2008 justjetjustis Said: 
justjetjustis you are so good wow
On October 17th 2008 darediva551 Said: 
darediva551 this is probably the best thing i have read on this sight!!!.. your amazing, and no doubt will one day be a huge poet :)
On October 14th 2008 ynot4u2hold Said: 
ynot4u2hold This poem is absolutely amazing. You are far better at poetry than what I am. Keep up the astonishing poetry my poetic friend.
On October 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 "when time is a factor that eats away" i love that line. i wish i wrote that lolol. again u amaze me. excellent job