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Does This Confuse You?

Before we begin
As you see me,be so kind
Attempt to sweep your mind
Open up where the child resides

bathe in all your wishes
unfulfilled and diminished
in the world of dying lotus
thou they have nothing
where to one pours cold rain
others see raining embers

Does this confuse you?

Simple enough to the playful hearts
and others wish to be old enough
they live like they do not know
come before the pityful souls
take a look,what do you see?
a God,a smile,a tear,a fool
or perhaps a stranger
reading this poem

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On October 17th 2008 darediva551 Said: 
darediva551 its not so much confusing as like they said abstract with words kind of.. but overall its beautiful.. "open up were the child resides" that is an amazing line again ur incredible
On October 16th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: 
Lovelyeyes0 I agree with thug... I'm curious to the origins... but not entirely conufused...
On October 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 im not confused however this appears to be very abstract. and i would like it if u told me the overall theme in this for i am curious.