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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On February 29th 2008 clackamasgirl Said : | |
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i think its the most amazing valentines poem on earth O,O |
| On February 23rd 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I was about to type that I loved the little line about the apples in the pine tree. I didn't know it actually had a meaning. I felt like it just said love is whatever we, you make of it, it's different and crazy for everyone. So anyways, I liked this one. Not the traditional v-day mushy stuff. |
| On February 16th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I did wonder about that. haha Nice ending line about Love not being math after the love plus love, throughout the poem. Tied it up real nice. |
| On February 16th 2008 Beliathor Said : | |
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"red apple in a pine tree" means confusing and illogical in case anyone wondered xD |
