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Suidical Love
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Created on 2-18-07
I was here
You were there
My greatest fear
Though it wasn't clear
Was that you didn't care
Every time I said I love you
Every time I thought of you
Can't you see that it was only you
You kept me from the blade
Since you always knew
I've always pulled through
All the bad choices I've made
You kept me from going beneath the skin
From letting the blade sink deeper within
Now my fears you see
Come true with time passing by
You'll never love me
You'll never need me
I can't help but cry
Your lies about caring about me are deep
You lied, now leave me alone and let me weep
Please Login to post comments| On April 3rd 2007 isdrowning Said : | |
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some parts were a little choppy and unfitting. some places don't really need the small words if you can still get your point across. i like it though. |
| On February 26th 2007 aussiechick24 Said : | |
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i know what you mean. this poem hits close to home for me. |
| On February 24th 2007 myaann Said : | |
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gasp i love it like crazy |
| On February 23rd 2007 shay9586 Said : | |
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Yeah I know how you feel. The guy I fell in love with lied to me too.....about everything. |
| On February 18th 2007 iwuvwilly Said : | |
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thats deep shit grl |
| On February 18th 2007 comlpicated16 Said : | |
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Sweetness |
| On February 18th 2007 lalasexxme Said : | |
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thatz hot and emo. |
