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They push you too far.Rate this Poem
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He Will Never Know |
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I trusted you. |
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I didn't want you as a friend. |
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Blood=Pain=Love |
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Releasing Blood. |
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Tears Destroy Life |
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My Addiction |
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Dont |
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Unwanted... Shithead! |
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Home Run. |
I didn't want you as a friend.
I trusted you before,
and I'll trust you again.
I'll allow you to stab that knife into my back,
Over and over, again and again.
I will still stand up for you
and I would still fight for you.
Because I'm a true friend.
Until one night you will push me too far.
I have many stab wounds that you have forgotten about.
I will always have to see them when I look into the mirror.
You've hurt me again and again.
Until I realized I didn't want you as a friend.
Then I will stand alone,
The pistol still shaking in my hands.
I only had to hurt you once
because were weak.
I told you thank you for helping me become strong.
For every stab mark will remain,
but so will I.
I only gave you one mark,
but you will no longer be a nark.
| On March 16th 2008 Bloodlust90 Said : | |
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i like it very strong meaning well done |
| On October 20th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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much emotion...great job! |
| On October 16th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow very intense, great poem! |
| On October 15th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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GREAT JOB AGAIN!!!!! again the emotion is fantastic |
| On October 15th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Oh wow, so much emotion. I love it. |
| On October 15th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Once again, totally amazing! The emotion is so strong! I love your word choice, too! |
| On October 15th 2007 sochula777 Said : | |
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That is very amazing work to me, I like ths poem alot! |
| On October 15th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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wow! Again, the anger! nice!!...lol...i'm guessing you're having some troubles with a "friend"....that sucks... |
| On October 15th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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Good Job, Stay strong XD |


