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They push you too far.

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I didn't want you as a friend.

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I trusted you before,
     and I'll trust you again.
I'll allow you to stab that knife into my back,
     Over and over, again and again.
I will still stand up for you
     and I would still fight for you.
Because I'm a true friend.

Until one night you will push me too far.

I have many stab wounds that you have forgotten about.
I will always have to see them when I look into the mirror.

You've hurt me again and again.

Until I realized I didn't want you as a friend.
     Then I will stand alone,
      The pistol still shaking in my hands.

I only had to hurt you once
     because were weak.
I told you thank you for helping me become strong.
     For every stab mark will remain,
     but so will I.
I only gave you one mark,
     but you will no longer be a nark.

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On March 16th 2008 Bloodlust90 Said :
Bloodlust90 i like it very strong meaning well done
On October 20th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz much emotion...great job!
On October 16th 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Wow very intense, great poem!
On October 15th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 GREAT JOB AGAIN!!!!! again the emotion is fantastic
On October 15th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Oh wow, so much emotion. I love it.
On October 15th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Once again, totally amazing! The emotion is so strong! I love your word choice, too!
On October 15th 2007 sochula777 Said :
sochula777 That is very amazing work to me, I like ths poem alot!
On October 15th 2007 darkangel726 Said :
darkangel726 wow! Again, the anger! nice!!...lol...i'm guessing you're having some troubles with a "friend"....that sucks...
On October 15th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 Good Job, Stay strong XD