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My so called true friend.

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I trusted you.

Views (121) Other Created on 10-14-07 Flag

I trusted you before.
   Before the first time.
I trusted you after and before;
   Before the next.
I fell for it again,
   But this will be the last.
   The last time I will trust you,
   And the last time I will stand up for you.

Was this all just a part of your simple plan?
   My last view of life was seeing you.
   With blood all over your hands.
   Still holding the knife,
   That was used to stab into my back,
   Again and again, and over and over.
  
You had the nerve to say
   I'm sorry. Will you ever trust me again?

Supposedly this is a true friend.

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On August 13th 2008 lilfoot31 Said :
lilfoot31 so true about everything...is very hard to trust people this days!
On March 16th 2008 Bloodlust90 Said :
Bloodlust90 Very good poem and sadly it is true for some
On November 16th 2007 jimbob1432 Said :
jimbob1432 bien.
On October 20th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz I can relate. So sorry to hear that you're facing problems like this. At least some good writings come from all the anger. Excellent Work!
On October 16th 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Impressive poem, and so much emotion, well done!
On October 15th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 WOWZA!!!! the emotions come across so clearly great job!!!!!!!:)
On October 15th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Awesome poem, I can relate!!
On October 15th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic This is amazing! So much anger, and I can definitely relate!
On October 15th 2007 lilfoot31 Said :
lilfoot31 i love it..:)
On October 15th 2007 sochula777 Said :
sochula777 This is a good poem love it and you're very talented!
On October 15th 2007 darkangel726 Said :
darkangel726 wow! I love all the anger and other emotions(that i caught) coming from it!
On October 15th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 This is really good! you should share it with the friend, Great Job