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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On October 13th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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I LOVE IT. ITS SO DEEP AND EMOTIONAL. IO CAN TOTALLY RELATE |
| On October 12th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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Good job on making whoever reads the poem feel every line. Thumbs up! |
| On October 10th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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I connected with this. Wonderfully written--an amazing poem :) |
| On October 9th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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great job =]
i really like your style with the formating of your words |
| On October 8th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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I apologize for the excess commenting, my computer's acting weird. |
| On October 8th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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I'm an editing speller, so I did notice a typo (7th to last line, 'hopless' should be 'hopeless'). I did like it though. You know how with certain poems, when you start reading them, you kinda get the impression it'll give you the chills...? I actually felt that with this piece of work. Great Job!! |
| On October 8th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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I'm an editing speller, so I did notice a typo (7th to last line, 'hopless' should be 'hopeless'). I did like it though. You know how with certain poems, when you start reading them, you kinda get the impression it'll give you the chills...? I actually felt that with this piece of work. Great Job!! |
| On October 8th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I love this! I can relate quite a bit...Great work, as always! |
| On October 8th 2007 OshadowO Said : | |
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great job it has the same feel as one i started but didn't finish at the beggining of school |
| On October 8th 2007 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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:) |
| On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is really good, I can feel the emotions. |
| On October 8th 2007 jimbob1432 Said : | |
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that's when i'm asleep.lol. nice peom. |
| On October 8th 2007 sochula777 Said : | |
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Wow you're very talented I really like it nice job! |
| On October 7th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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Great I really liked this, I've been there in fact I wrote a poem today about being numb inside :( GREAT JOB!! |
