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He Will Never Know

Views (165) Other Created on 8-16-07 Flag

   As she waits for her fifteenth birthday,
he turns twenty-three.
   He said it doesn't make a difference
That he would love her no matter what the difference in age
   She knew that was one of the many reasons she loved him.
   He had touched her heart
                      with compliments
                      questions
                      love
                      and childhood memories.
   Everything he did touched her heart.

      Does he know he has her heart in his hands?
           If he lets go, her heart will fall to the dirt, 
                only to be stepped on.
                      Where it may never beat again.

      Does he know how gentle he is with her heart and soul?

^%&*$^&#%@!^%#*%^%^*&#4^@%#^^&^^% 

He told her a month ago that he was getting deployed for 15 months
                                                                         To Iraq.

      Does he know how much she is going to miss him?

                                 *^*^*^*^*

                 He leaves.
          She waits for 13 months
Only to receive a letter from his best friend.

*****He will never know how much she loved and adored him.*****

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On July 11th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly Oh wow. sad but really good.
On September 8th 2007 darkangel726 Said :
darkangel726 this is sad...but i like it....a lot of people must go through almost the same thing...yet different everytime and never expected when it should be
On September 2nd 2007 cassnorton Said :
cassnorton wow...that one gave me some chills b/c it is prob. true too many times over!!
On August 19th 2007 TaUroNui Said :
TaUroNui i like it!
On August 19th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz That's so sad! It's really good though!
On August 18th 2007 Burnley14 Said :
Burnley14 That one is so sad. i liked this one.