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Created:
11/26 2008
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Love
My Poems
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Winter |
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I'm Sorry . . . |
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Gaps |
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Memories |
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Shiver |
Gaps
It was a beautiful day outside,
Cause' you were right next to me.
We locked hands, and started to walk around the campus-
Around the ClockTower that symbolizes Time forever.
Then, I took our hands up close to my eyes,
And started to examine it.
You said something that still makes me chuckle to this day.
"WHAT!!? What's wrong with my Nails?"
Haha!! Nothing Angel, :D :DD
Nothing is wrong with your nails.
I was thinking of something else.
I was thinking that . . .
You are the only person that can Truly
Fill the Gaps between my fingers.
No one else can fit-in quite well,
As perfectly as you.
I kissed your hand, and we went to class.
Please Login to post comments| On January 21st 2009 ialwayswrite Said: |
| i liked this poem it was sweet and nice, not the best poem i've ever read, it was really poetic and i felt what you meant, i didn't like the smiley faces poersonally i think it distracts from the poem i give it a 6/10 |
| On January 19th 2009 search4me Said: |
| I like this one... especially the last part "you are the only person than can truly fill the gaps between my fingers" Very creative. |
| On January 19th 2009 BBoyBoba Said: |
| Thankyou very much =]]
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| On January 17th 2009 run4w4ytr4in Said: |
| I like this, its great when things just fit perfectly. If you dont mind me asking and (its probably irrelevant) how old are you? You write like you're quite mature, after reading the intro on your front page i think that you will look back in yrs to come and see that you were actually quite wise! |
| On November 26th 2008 angienichollie Said: |
| This is cute!
I always wondered why you always examine our hands together,
I thought I was holding your hand the wrong way, and you looking at was a sign that I was holding your hand wrong.
haha Silly Goose!
I like this poem like the line "Around the ClockTower that symbolizes Time forever."
It's no wonder are hands fit perfectly, it's just right. =) |
