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MY veiw on Love |
LIFE...
Life is not to be taken for granted,
Those who do become enchanted,
By the evil witches' cursed hand,
Bewitched across all the land.
No one knows the crows' past life,
Which is filled with mortal strife,
With Decay and ruin on every path,
Thou shall face its' horrific wrath.
Those who enter this enclosed crypt,
Will never again see the passing ships,
Asail on the clear blue sea,
To wisk away you and me.
Fields of dead, black rose,
Will bite off at the curious' nose,
Pulling them into endless sleep,
Far, far, into the black deep,
For which you will never again awake awake,
To see everyone you love agape,
At the sight of your bleeding heart...
| On January 19th 2008 ToothpickQueen Said : | |
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love it |
| On January 8th 2008 OPreflector Said : | |
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Wonderful poetry :-] |
| On October 25th 2007 krsisco Said : | |
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omfg thas how i feel all the time |
| On October 19th 2007 guiltyasgod Said : | |
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nice write and ownage to lilpapa |
| On October 3rd 2007 AzalieUzumaki Said : | |
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o yeah?
well, a bitch iz a dog, a dog barks, bark iz on a tree, a tree iz a part of nature, & nature iz beautiful, so yeah, thx 4 the complement |
| On October 3rd 2007 lilpapa4421 Said : | |
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omg this sucks so bad its making my eyes bleed just from bleeding but ill give u a vote for being such a great BITCH |
| On August 16th 2007 InTheMist Said : | |
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wow...this is cool....very visual....I likey! ^.^ |
| On August 1st 2007 MirakiAzumiXP Said : | |
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i like ur poem. |


