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Created on 4-6-07
Dark deep water flows through the creek
Raccoons devour crayfish while i sleep
while the wind blows, i can hear the rustle of the leaves
the crickets chirp continuously
deer wander through the fields always on the same path
owls hoot as mice scurry through the grass
opossums noisily dig through the trash
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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Interesting! |
| On January 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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That is what I am talkin bout!! Very Good!! |
| On August 13th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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Its short and simple, yet detailed and delightful! Great poem! |
| On July 6th 2007 Cheyenne1023 Said : | |
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i really like this poe its cool and i LOVE it |
