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Fake
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Created on 3-9-07
your words are so scriped
so fake they make me sick
nothing is real anymore
your like a soap oprea lie
acting is for the stage
your game is so lame
your living out some twisted vision
your lost in your own prision
Please Login to post comments| On March 30th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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nice n great |
| On March 27th 2008 madmarcus Said : | |
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ha ha I just voted this twice! don't know how. but I liked it this time as the first time |
| On January 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Ok, here goes. I loved the message of the poem. Let's get that out there, very good. However, one of my biggest peeves is spelling. Also, the lack of punctuation makes it rather hard to read. I think it would be much better if you cleaned up the spelling a bit, and added some commas at least, but like I said before, the message was great |
| On August 22nd 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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nice, good work |
| On August 13th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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short and good |
| On August 1st 2007 madmarcus Said : | |
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Have you ever heard the song "game show" by ministry? check it! |
| On July 24th 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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NOT BAD AT ALL SHORT AND TO THE POINT I LIKE THAT! GOOD JOB |
| On May 1st 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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it doen't need to be long to be good |
| On March 9th 2007 Ellesmidget Said : | |
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short, but nicely written |
