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i just got dumped

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Broken

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I feel like a broken toy thrown in the corner.

you were carless with my heart it was fun to play with till you broke it

apart.

just thrown away and forgotten

used and discarded.

nothing more you can get out of me i'm just ancient history.

        un like you i feel everything it burns within

it hurts that i couldn't win

i lost you that should be a sin.

  The love i had for you is

nothing more then a spilled cup

wasted useless just a mess to clean up.

     Don't worry i won't cause any drama, i'm not one to make a scene

i'll leave that for the stage.

i'll just let you erase me, let your mistake just easily disapear

just fade into the background like a scared deer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol So many treat others like this and it is a horrible thing to have to suffer through. Well, though it is sad, I still like it.
On January 22nd 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper i like it
On January 10th 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 thanx yall
On January 9th 2008 tpxLunatic Said :
tpxLunatic something like this should never have to b
On January 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth :((((((( So careless some are with the heart of another.
On January 9th 2008 jake189 Said :
jake189 what a sad poem... but i like it... more or less we have the same situation... but now im free... hahaha...
On January 9th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very Good!!
On January 8th 2008 AMC500 Said :
AMC500 That is a very sad poem. Its has alot of feeling behind it. I like the opening line about being broken like a toy thrown in the corner. Hope that you will come out strong from this