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Created on 1-1-08
How can it be i feel so alone
when your right beside me
i feel chilled to the bone
I'm surrounded by many
but feel deserted and empty
no one can see me
no one knows the real me
can't get close enough to hold me
i run in fear of rejection
it's what i do for protection
keep everything inside
i hide to stay alive
how much longer
will i last on this ride
before i wither away and die
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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Wow, I have felt this many times and I do still today, it is like a never ending nightmare but someday I will learn to love. |
| On January 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I have felt this emotion before, and just felt it again through your words. Great work! |
| On January 2nd 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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wow this is really good.. this is how i feel |
| On January 2nd 2008 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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*sigh* I know the feeling... Good job! |
| On January 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I know exactly how that feels, Excellent!! |
| On January 1st 2008 NickCamp Said : | |
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i liked it alot =] |
