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Created on 8-19-07
You make me so sick
Your lies are so thick
like a contagious rash that you continuously itch
when will it stop pouring out you selfish bitch
your so good you could blow down bricks
you drain life out of everything like a tick
you've cast your spell on so many you evil witch
strangling everything in your path with just a flick of your wrist
why can't they see through your blinding grip
on and on you even use the same old tricks
what is it that makes them keep coming back all i can say is you
must be good at sucking dicks
Please Login to post comments| On August 30th 2008 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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lilfoot31 ripped off my poem. if you read her poem thats called blind, that written after she read mine you can see. stupid bitch |
| On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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That is good and i felt the pain, frustration and anger in your words. |
| On January 6th 2008 lilfoot31 Said : | |
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I LOVE IT... |
| On January 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very good! |
| On August 20th 2007 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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you have no idea! |
| On August 20th 2007 Extremist12 Said : | |
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I cant help but feel the frustration in that peice. the last line made me giggle. |
| On August 20th 2007 Curtains4Foray Said : | |
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Ooh, this is a nice one. :) |
| On August 20th 2007 sarahb8 Said : | |
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wow that rocks!!! |
| On August 20th 2007 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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thanx i thought so |
| On August 20th 2007 madmarcus Said : | |
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BRILLIANT!!! |
