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Forms Of Daylight Undefined Pt.2
I really hate how this thing tells you you spell stuff incorrectly...It's like its' vocab is minuscule...ehh! :) w/e lol
This is my extended version of my "Forms Of Daylight Undefined"
.....Until pearls, mellifluous, in mornings along side me...
Come to greet, impressionistic skies..I lay..
..Rivulets of ashen haze to adorn; Placed above..Will they, for twilight mourn?
A mist of lucid tears, upon her cheek, worn ever so blithefuly
Delighted, within ecstatic enchantment....
Fathomed through sombre dawn breaking,
Glistening as they fall; Illuminates the fog of weeping..
As I parade the walks of this promenade, veiled no more in silenced woe
A ball as from such wondered fairy tales;
We epitomize...Such swaying elegance
..Casts, onto every wall...Effigies, of her own,
Ravishingly divine, exquisite resplendence.. Within such harmony balanced...
They are merely repercussions, of her
Phenomenal, heart-stirring, eminent, anomalous charms
This masquerade of reveries...Is not its' entity..
Reflections leave the most important parts astray...The inner beauty..
A ghost, to a still life, imitation..Captured by not a such,
Insensate, cathedral, being..Ignorant to the true essence...
Of what is to be, which I have seen...
"Love does not make you blind...It let's you see what really matters"
So, I will wrap myself within...Sink deep, below the crimson satin glow....
Within tunnels of your life flow...
Within vibrant plagues, these illusions;
Vast wrinkled sheets; Fields of languish; This bed of mine
..Have come to rise...To show me
...Sanctuaries of a thousand swans....Within the other, a lover drowns...
..Submerged...Open their eyes..From horrors of a sleep...
Caressed within loving arms...As silk so delicate,
Into the air it twists...
Scents of roses, tulips, of violets, and of love...
Upon the glass frame still....
Entwine the speculum of chasms, within rooms;
Drenched in brilliancy...Coiling vines of ivy,
Give life to a crown of celestial bloom...
In pallid air, a dove...
Whispers in the winds...It crawls...At the feet of my love...
Through white lights bound; Lacing heart and soul,
..Speaks to me...Together...We will be...Forever sewn
Deadened branches creep the outside world...
..Rip away, tranquility....Meditate, I try to fake...
Not missing you, the truth; Everyday, I break...
Midnight, across the stars, glitters passionately in weakness
...On mind and body, stirred....I offer everything.....My pride I throw away for you..
The shimmering dust above it falls...Tonight...As snow upon your face,
Look above as your eyes, begin to reflect the night into the sky...
"No fear of death,
'Nor will sickness ever dance in heaven"..
..In the seams of a fabrication...I was unaware....
....Life was seeping from my pores...I dreamt of,
Scarlet drips, draining; When daylight formed....You hid my eyes...
I opened them into a different place...I was alone...
I realized...Until my heart, is crystal clear...We'll glow, of blood, undefined.....
Until my heart with you is near, I will, in blurred existence shine...
Unknown, unsure, unseen, by caresses forsaken ...And non-alive
..Toast health my dear..I've been trying to be it all..
...I am every Insect from these blinding walls, which fall apart...
Dragged through toxins, inebriating
Acid I have sipped, sweat I have choked upon, tears I have drowned within...
Through every shot..Glass or needle; I persevered...
...Drunk on love, I may be...Addicted, most definitely...
I need my fix, I need my love injection!!!
| On June 11th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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it it definetly extended. No, but I like it. I actually think that I like the first one a little better, but this is still really great work~ |


