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the time i've lost with you
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Created on 1-14-07
i spent so much time with you
i don't no wat i should do
i wish we could be together
but the tine i've lost with you is better
i wish we loved one another
but the time i've lost with you is better
Please Login to post comments| On February 11th 2007 Jush Said : | |
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i liked it but u need to leghthen ur poems.
haha and i cant spell. :P |
| On January 17th 2007 Nitersss Said : | |
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I like it alot, its very nice- the only thing and its my opinion is to spell the words dont use free hand "wat" is "what".... but it is your poem and do as you wish i am just telling you what I think
=) |
| On January 14th 2007 thalioness Said : | |
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elaborate |
