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this version is better than the other!

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Created: 12/07 2007
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Category: Anger

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Its Over... (better version)
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Its Over... (better version)

In the days when there was light and sunshine,

people did not thrive on money and lies,

there was only peace and happiness,

not a care in the world,

but just look at us now!

 

Sitting in a pool of hate,

Overwhelmed with the fact of doom,

There is no turning back to the day,

to the day before point of no return.

Power has created lies,

Bliding us all by creation,

And just look at us now! 

 

 

To long we have sat,

mesmerized by technology,

Its time to rise up now,

To something we cannot save,

But can extend,

This earth will perish in fire,

But not before we are saved!

 

In the days when there was light and sunshine,

People did not thirve on money and lies,

There was only peace and happiness,

Not a care in the world,

But just look at us now!

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On April 30th 2009 Michi47 Said: 
Michi47 Very good, well done, I really liked it.
On December 11th 2007 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Very interesting thoughts, well done!
On December 7th 2007 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 i do like this one better. nice job
On December 7th 2007 chayeah22 Said: 
chayeah22 Yes, definatley better, I love it!