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Probrably my darkest hour...Rate this Poem
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Created:
02/12 2008
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79
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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2
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The Prom Dress |
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4
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I Want To Linger: A Poetic Portrait |
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3
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Of a Heavy and Frightened Heart |
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5
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January Wind |
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Post Season Thought of a Freshman |
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The Carousel |
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1
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Broken Promise |
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1
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Happiness |
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4
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Her Cry For Help |
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5
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In My Heart |
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The Broken Heart of the Beast |
Her Cry For Help
It’s one o’clock and I need to sleep,But the pain inside is just too deep.All the words you have ever said,They spin round and round inside my head. You say you love me all the time,And in your heart I am divine.What you’ve said must be a lie,For what I know makes me want to die. Now I feel so hurt and lost.Apparently now, she’s the boss.I can’t believe you’ve let this be.It seems that you have forgotten me. I thought that I had been strong for you.I need you now, but there’s nothing you will do.All those things you’ve whispered in my ear,They make me want to cry right here. Please rise up and make a stand.Please comfort me and hold my hand.I never ask for more than you can give.Help restore my will to live.
| On March 22nd 2008 SlackAttack55 Said: |
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| who is it that is makiing you feel like that girlie? |
| On February 12th 2008 Babydotz Said: |
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| I like this but I think it would mean more if you seperated the lines a little... Keep writing |


