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tis is abat my sistr who has brain tumurRate this Poem
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"Gen"
this is abaut my little sister who just had her sixth birthday, and her family has been told by five diffrent doctors that she is going to die of a brain tumer, it's tering the family apart, and she gets teased heeps at school because she dosen't act normal and she can't act normal and she has trouble speaking and her family doesnt want there little girl to die this way there trying to get help, but have found nothing yet.
Gen is a little girl
and a sweet girl
she's just a small pearl
she would never desite
with her little curls
but she's unaware...
she could die soon
though people stare
none of them care
she has a brain tumur,
and acts diffrent
then other people
she lacks her brain
and people think she's insane
but who is to blame
love is the link
she would never be the same
her perants may be kissing...
but there allready missing her
she causes a stir
her brother can't cope
and his friends think he's a dope
but they don't know abaut the end
they don't lend compassion
all they do is critisize him
abaut his fashion
she's laying in bed
and with a sigh
her brother said bye
and left her to die
but they arn't going to let her die
were never going to say good bye.
it's hard to wright abaut this but it is written by me, Ashley Trayder
"sometimes it hurts so much, pisical pain is the only relief "
-woody (her brother)
| On September 9th 2008 doodle2442spaz Said: |
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| thats a good poem but its soo sad. |
| On July 26th 2008 ewaers Said: |
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| :'( that was really sad!_! it almost made (*ME*) cry :'( lol |
| On April 14th 2008 ShiningKanin Said: |
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| wow... that's so sad... but it's a really good poem! |
| On April 6th 2008 faitharino Said: |
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| that was real good and yeah sometimes physical pain is the only relief |
| On April 3rd 2008 kesaia1029 Said: |
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| I can relate to this very much,I met a 7 year old girl who died of a brain tumor. |
| On April 3rd 2008 angelofpurity5 Said: |
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| wow i really like this its sad though but well written |
| On April 3rd 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said: |
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| thank you all! |
| On April 3rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
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| I just sent you a note. My prayers are with you. June |
| On April 3rd 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said: |
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| Wow..that's sad...and it is so good poem! *thumbs up* |
| On April 3rd 2008 jetkills Said: |
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| oh im not sure wat to say thats really sad but the poem is awesome :) |
| On April 3rd 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said: |
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| thanx for commenting and voteing! |
| On April 3rd 2008 Jermie6363 Said: |
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| this is sweet i likk this one out of all |
| On April 3rd 2008 surferchic89 Said: |
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| hmmm, nice, I like how you have put it down, almost making people guess at what your saying, good. |


