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Please read. It's sooooo sad.

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My Tears fall like Soft summer rain

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As i step outside on a summers day, the light begins to fade

Dark clouds roll across the sky, and My red eyes they do shade.

My tears have fallen but now it's time to lock those memories away

I will never forget the day you left, the day you ran away.

You left me here all alone, now my tears are falling down,

You left me here to defend my self in this little old country town.

A Year has passed but the rain still falls, like it did on that very night

The night i held you in my arms and cried with all my might.

I remember all the affection you showed and all the love you gave,

Now the only way i remember you, is by the Roses near your grave.

 

This is the first time i've actually written a proper poem. SO please tell me what you think and i might write some more.

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On March 12th 2008 stormdust Said :
stormdust that was a beautiful poem, that came from deep down from your heart...loved it.
On December 5th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall Love it! Very Good! =]
On December 5th 2007 Angel4eva007 Said :
Angel4eva007 Awww thanks. Its actually the first poem i've ever written...well a poem that actually makes some sence.
On December 5th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 VERY GOOD BUT VERY SAD. GOOD JOB
On December 4th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 Its really good!! seriously!! post me on anymore!! *J*