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you make a regular day...so amazing

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Understanding Love

Views (66) Love Created on 8-3-08 Flag

I find it kind of hard to understand

this is feeling is new

i've never felt it before until i met you

it wasn't until you came into my life

that i felt and found

what i feel now

 

all through the day you're in my head

from the things you did

to the things you said

and even when i close my eyes

i can't get you off my mind

 

i won't call it obsession

nor infatuation

I call it True Love

 

When you look me in the eyes

a spark ignites

and i don't feel complete

until you're by my side

 

You make a regular day

absolutely amazing

just by being you

 

and while looking into your eyes

while laying in your arms

while feeling your lips on mine

I finally understand this thing called...

LOVE

 

 <3 issa

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On October 5th 2008 chamaolie Said :
chamaolie awwww [tear]..... omg, this is sooooo nice..
On August 7th 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery Love it! i reallly like the second stanza your amazing! KMp
On August 7th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia loved it. You are getting better and better my lil cutie sister. How are you?
On August 4th 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight I like the use of assonance... but you might want to be consistent with your capitalization and lower case unless you want those words to be emphasized. :D I really liked the second and fourth stanza. Great job.
On August 4th 2008 speederspider Said :
speederspider crap I really sucked at my response. I hope you can decipher between my typos.
On August 4th 2008 speederspider Said :
speederspider very good:) I wish it was a little more descriptive, while your are talented it doesn't set itself apart from any other love poem. I think you should make it more your own. Instead of saying looking into your eyes. Say "Looking into the deep brown, almond eyes." Just stuff like that puts passion into your work. Nevertheless, I would say I am a little impressed considering you are still pretty young. I will definantly upvote this because it's a good poem and doesn't suck:)
On August 3rd 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 awhh so cutee!!!!!!!!!! :) i love it REESA!!!!!!!!!!!! :) lol
On August 3rd 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet g'ahhhhhhhhhhhh you made me wish i was with the boyfriend right now. this is beautiful, and since i know how you sound now i could picture you singing/speaking it. (PS you dont have to tell me you have new poems hun, im one of your "followers")