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Created on 6-29-08
Burn fire Burn
Burn for love of him
Burn until my very end
Burn when ignited...
Burn when indited...
which is every time...
i see him
Burn fire Burn
Burn inside my heart of stone
Burn and melt my heart turned cold
Burn when lighted...
Burn when he is sighted
because...
i love him
Burn fire Burn
Burn all the time
Burn though everyone calls it a crime
Burn cause my heart he is stealin'
Burn on and on cause i love the feelin'
Burn fire Burn
It's something I can't seem to hide
it moves within me
down deep inside
It feels so good
and
It feels so right
Burn fire Burn
Please Login to post comments| On July 31st 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Sounds like a great set of lyrics! The repeating of "Burn fire Burn" as well as the "burn because" and the "burn when" patterns are wonderful. They just give this poem so much power that you can't help but fall in love with it! Very nicely done! |
| On July 7th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Definitely my favourite of your poems. Well written too |
| On July 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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I did have a great time on my vacation, thank you. lol Anyways, I agree with a lot of the comments below me. I think it's mezmerizing. I'm not sure why, but I totally love it. Nice job! Keep it up! :P |
| On July 1st 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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I like it a lot, especially the emphasis and repetition of the phrase "burn fire burn." Maybe its because I have this fascination with fire, or maybe its because something about this poem struck me the way other repetitious things normally don't. Anyways - great job. |
| On June 30th 2008 JustifyMisery Said : | |
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i think this may be my favorite its really well written! i love it. kMP |
| On June 29th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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i absolutely love this. love the repitition. i think i like this poem the best outta all of em i've read, really good job. |
| On June 29th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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This is good. One of your best. |
| On June 29th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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I love the third stanza on it....Great format also.... |
| On June 29th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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keep writing.
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| On June 29th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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one of your best, you're getting good really quick |
