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More Than That

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If you look at me....

You may think I'm shy

you could be right -- But I'm More Than That

If you hear me speak....

You may what i say is boring

to other's you could be right -- But I'm More Than That

If you read my writing....

you may find me lonely and insecure

hmmm....you could be right..... But I'm More Than That

If you see me with my friends

You may think I'm wild and loud

think you're right? -- I'm More Than That

If you every see me cry

You may think I'm moody and emotional

well you could be right -- But I'm More Than That

If you see me mad

you may think of me as mean and hostile

go ahead believe that -- But I'm More Than That

In the end

if you step into my shoes

you will see how i see the world

loose, hostile, emotional, insecure, shy, moody, crazy, wild, evil.....

do you think i'm right?

If you get into my skin...

see the world as i see it...

live the life that i am living

then you can judge me...

then you can rate me...

but for now

I'm More Than That

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On June 25th 2008 JustifyMisery Said :
JustifyMisery yeah i read this the first time lol its really good
On June 25th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I feel like this sometimes too. *thumbs up*
On June 22nd 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 WOW I LOVE THIS ONE....GREAT JOB ON THIS ONE, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.......♥.......
On June 22nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia This is so cute of you.liked it............
On June 21st 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet the idea of this poem is really good