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one of my sad poemsRate this Poem
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dont leave me hoping |
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give me a reason... |
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I still Love you |
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as I watched him... |
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a dream |
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wait for me |
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Romeo and Juliet |
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close to death |
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boy nxt door |
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For my angel |
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Wait for Me |
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Wait for Me
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Created on 6-3-08
she sits by herself
on a bench
under a dim streelamp
just watching the rushing people go by
she looks like she is waiting for something
to be more precise
she is waiting for someone
his name is David
she had met him yesterday
right here at this very spot
they had spoken for awhile, and he spoke like he cared
like he understood
they had promised each other to meet at the same place
at noon
and well she kept her promise...but he didn't
when she got there
she had found a letter...
she caught it before it flew it away
it read...
"Dear Isabel,
I enjoyed our conversation yesterday. You seem like a nice person, it's just that i don't i am ready for this yet...I didn't want to come because i was afraid to make a commitment...i didn't want to make another promise that i could never keep...I am sorry...it's not you...it's me."
...there is nothing but silence...
...she feels nothing but regret...
and then her emotions take over
"why?!" she cries
"how was i so blind...how did i not see?!
Why did i fall so fast into love?
Why did i let myself?...
Why...WHY?!?!"
the question goes over and over in her head...
she falls into despair...
she turns the letter around...
she writes
"I loved you...was that not enough?"
she pulls out a gun...
she cries for a moment...
lets her tears stain the paper...
she yells out his name...
the pulls the trigger...
everything stop...
people turn their head...
someone pushes through the crowd
a handsome young man,
he runs to the bench
takes Isabel's limp hand...
he looks at her eyes...
which are red and glassy...from her fallen tears
he pulls her close,
holds her tight
her blood stains his shirt but he doesn't mind
that one single gun shot
brought him back to her side
he picks up the letter
looks at her once more
he whispers in her ear...
"you did not unfold the letter all the way"
so he does it for her...
and he reads the words aloud to her soul which lingers...
"But I love you Isabel, I won't be here right on time...but if you love me too...i know you will wait"
Love,
David
Please Login to post comments| On October 5th 2008 chamaolie Said : | |
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i remember this one...... awwwwww..... still makes my stomach fly XD |
| On July 13th 2008 charon17 Said : | |
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This was extremly good |
| On June 25th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww this is deep... so so sad:'( Great work btw |
| On June 4th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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wow this was powerful |
| On June 4th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Oh this is my favorite from you so far...keep writing girl......And no,why would i hate you for writing something like this.People write thier own feelings like i am.I forgot to tell you that i just posted new poems.I highly recommend "Words of Frustration". |
| On June 3rd 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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this was extremely touching and gave me chills |
| On June 3rd 2008 JustifyMisery Said : | |
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aww omg thats so sad! |
