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Created:
11/30 2008
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149
Category:
Love
My Poems
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37
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I Hope To Call You My Baby |
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24
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So this is what it's like |
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19
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Our Dreadful Decisions |
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16
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To Love You For All Eternity |
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31
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Drowning Without You |
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16
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My Hearts Desire |
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14
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Blissful Oblivion |
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21
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Let's Do It Right |
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16
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A Leaf Fallen |
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15
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Unappeasable Love |
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13
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I'm Here To Stay |
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19
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The Pain That Is You |
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23
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Stop and Think |
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19
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Forever Together |
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24
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Stop Treating Me Like A Slave |
Able To Breathe
Feel it burning like a fire.
This is an emotion oh so dire.
It'll tear you apart,
if it gets to your heart.
Its only brought me pain,
from it there's nothing to gain.
True love isn't meant to last,
now what I had is in the past.
You broke me utterly,
my heart's crushed under me.
I miss you baby,
they way we would play.
The way I'd sing,
and on me you would lean.
The stars shone bright,
but now it's a dark night.
Without you here I am lost,
out the door I was tossed.
The sun still rises,
as I tear apart my guises.
Deciding which is best,
to hide my pain from the rest.
Breathe like an angel,
I wish I was somehow able.
To bring you back to me,
so you'd never leave.
So baby, come back to me,
and maybe I'll be able to breathe.
| On April 5th 2009 tlkn Said: |
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| i wright poems and im pretty good but this is one of your better ones...really good job
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| On December 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| Nice job I really like it! |
| On November 30th 2008 Stolensoul16 Said: |
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| Gorgeous and oh-so touching! |
| On November 30th 2008 bluerose01 Said: |
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| love it and I know how you feel to lose someone you love you just want them to come back boy friend right? |
| On November 30th 2008 bayleebroken Said: |
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| still really good! |


