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Stop Treating Me Like A Slave |
Stay Close, Don't Go.
My heart is beating, beating right out of my chest.
My eyes are burning, burning from the tears.
If you leave me tonight I'll wake up alone.
Don't tell me I'll be better on my own.
So stay close baby don't go.
You know that I love you, you know I always will.
Don't try to save my heart by doing this.
Because I won't be able to live without hearing your voice.
But I won't be able to talk to you without you by my side.
My heart is pumping, pumping harder and harder.
And I'm choking on the air.
So stay close don't go.
Don't leave me tonight.
'Cause I don't want to wake up alone.
| On September 21st 2008 Jarrettsdance Said : | |
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great emotions! awesomeness |
| On August 17th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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touching and fervent, worth the read, I enjoyed the thought captured in this one, very urgent and needing. Bliss!~L |
| On August 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's wonderful! Great job! ~Kudos~ |
| On August 17th 2008 takemywings Said : | |
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Beautiful.. Very very deep.. And I will miss your poems on here.. :) |
| On August 16th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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wow this is really deep Andy, but I honestly love it. Great job! |
| On August 16th 2008 akilah328 Said : | |
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i love this!!! It's really good... Strong emotion |
| On August 16th 2008 XxXastinXxX Said : | |
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WOWW I LIKE UR POEMS THEIR DIFFRENT THEN MOST CHEEZY POEMS xD |
| On August 16th 2008 JamiiCage Said : | |
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Andy I LOVE your writing and most of all I LOVE MY MAIN MAN :D hehe |
| On August 16th 2008 rosiegirl24 Said : | |
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W-O-W! That was really really good! |
| On August 16th 2008 moonbellgirl Said : | |
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i love it just how u show how much u really love her i don't think
it was a "Whatever" i don't know how u can just say that 0.0
but it's your life i guess. ^^ |
| On August 16th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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To bad I did lose her. But, whatever, I guess I should be used to people doing that by now. |
| On August 16th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. This is awesome. I love the fear that's described at the thought of losing the person you love. Great job. |
| On August 16th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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that's just amazing. I don't think I can write as brilliantly as you can. |
| On August 16th 2008 angelfighting Said : | |
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This is like a song by Secondhand Serenade.
"Stay Close Don't Go"
Lovely poem btw. =]] |
| On August 16th 2008 jetblack247 Said : | |
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you never disapoint mate :D (andy told me to comment :P) |
| On August 16th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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nice job. |
| On August 16th 2008 bayleebroken Said : | |
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yea its beautifull. |
| On August 16th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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Aww this was so amazing Andy! You really should get your poems published. I thought this was simply adorable! :D nice job |


