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Another one for BayleeRate this Poem
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I Hope To Call You My Baby |
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So this is what it's like |
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Our Dreadful Decisions |
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To Love You For All Eternity |
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Drowning Without You |
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My Hearts Desire |
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Blissful Oblivion |
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Let's Do It Right |
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A Leaf Fallen |
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Unappeasable Love |
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I'm Here To Stay |
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The Pain That Is You |
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Stop and Think |
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Forever Together |
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Stop Treating Me Like A Slave |
Lets Live This Moment Like It's Our Last
My head is clear, my heart is true.
I know I'm never gunning to stop loving you.
You haunt my dreams, and lift my heart.
I fear the day we'll be apart.
Whether it be tomorrow, or once we grow old.
I know that without you my life would be cold.
You are my sun, you are my moon.
Day after day I hope to see you soon.
I never thought to feel so happy, or so complete.
I can see now that our love cannot be beat.
Because baby you saved me, baby you love me.
You put my fears to rest and I'm no longer going crazy.
I wish I could see the future, so I could know what to expect.
So that I might know what i should do next.
My only fear now, my only unhappy thought.
Is that if I were to lose you i would know naught.
I couldn't live without you, can't sleep without you.
But I am so sure that this love is true.
So let's live this moment like it's our last,
and lets hope my fears never come to pass.
| On August 4th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Yea, she is, she means everything to me. And you know it |
| On August 3rd 2008 bayleebroken Said : | |
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this is really good!( i bet this girl is AMAZING! lol jk) |
| On August 2nd 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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niceness, touching and slightly nostalgic, the pentameter is a bit shaky but the pathos makes up for it. bueno!~L |
| On August 2nd 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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:D very emotional and very well composed, greatness! |
| On August 2nd 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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this is a great poem Friendly Stalker =) |
| On August 2nd 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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Amazing as always Andy, keep up the good work :D |
| On August 2nd 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Incredible, as usual. I missed reading your work. |


