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I Hope To Call You My Baby |
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So this is what it's like |
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Our Dreadful Decisions |
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To Love You For All Eternity |
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Drowning Without You |
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My Hearts Desire |
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Blissful Oblivion |
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Let's Do It Right |
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A Leaf Fallen |
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Unappeasable Love |
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I'm Here To Stay |
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The Pain That Is You |
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Stop and Think |
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Forever Together |
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Stop Treating Me Like A Slave |
Sleeping Without You
You just don't get it do you?
This isn't a game, not to me at least.
So why do you take it as such?
So you can see me grovel at your feet,
begging you not to go?
You feel powerful when you bring me down.
You think it makes you stronger.
Well I see now that you're weak, you're pitiful.
I see now that i wasn't at fault.
All those late nights, when I'd try to talk to you.
Trying to understand why you keep hurting me.
When I make it so plain, that I love you with ll of my heart.
I'd willingly give away my life so that you could keep your own.
Well no more darling, you've just hurt me too much.
I can't take it any more, the pain and the heartbreak.
I'm leaving you, even though I still love you.
But apparently you can't see that.
I'm just a casual fling, a toy nothing more.
So farewell now darling but remember this.
My love was true, my heart was unbroken.
But no longer will you see this.
No longer will I acknowledge you.
Feel free to wander this world forsaken and alone.
Because I was the only one who cared.
The only one who dared, to try and find your heart.
But sadly I failed, miserably in truth.
But I feel so much better now.
Sleeping without you.
| On August 2nd 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Wow, I've been there before. Your words hit me darkly. Great writing. |
| On July 28th 2008 MeganBeckett Said : | |
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Osm. :]] |
| On July 28th 2008 bbjr234 Said : | |
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wow...
that was amazing
totally makes mine seem like
a preschooler wrote it
lmao |
| On July 28th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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while i've been gone for awhile, i definitely missed your work.
great job (: |
| On July 27th 2008 halfemoon Said : | |
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This is great. You wrote from your heart! Great job, I plan to check out your others! =D |
| On July 27th 2008 mern13 Said : | |
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That pretty amazing |
| On July 27th 2008 whitneyleighh Said : | |
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wow, this is really good. |
| On July 26th 2008 naturalblue420 Said : | |
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I love this, you are talented |
| On July 26th 2008 HALMAY Said : | |
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i liked it. i liked it a lot. scary stalker btw. =0 hahaha jk. keep on writing. - alice |
| On July 26th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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wow, i love it!! |
| On July 25th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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I like this one, raw but satisfyingly vengeful. Nice.~L |
| On July 25th 2008 kittx Said : | |
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i subscribed to you because a madly in love with you...and yes i am a stalker |


