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They Are Only... For You
Death is no longer what i fear.
Now i fear rejection from you.
Do the words i speak mean nothing?
Or have I gotten through to you?
My life is forfeit without you.
My love is lost if not expressed.
You hold the single key to my heart.
But you just can't see that.
Getting high, getting drunk.
What the hell does it matter?
This endless torment is ripping me apart.
My soft pulsating heart is now exposed.
I cry out for love i cannot have.
Was it brave to tell you?
Or just another one of my mistakes?
My love has been explored probed and jeered at.
But why can't you embrace it?
Am I some kind of toy?
I get boring so you throw me away.
Stop throwing me away my feelings are true.
And they are only.... for you.
| On July 17th 2008 JamiiCage Said : | |
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I'm seriously in love with every single peice you write. You are extreamly talented and i just love how you express it and write it down. |
| On July 16th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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wow...it so sad but i love it. it really good! jeez...this poem...wow aw man i feel so bad for ya... but i hope that you would find other girl! :) |
| On July 15th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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this is soooo sad...this girl does not know what she is missing!!!! you are a wonderful writer!! and this poem....gosh...man i feel so bad for you!! =( |
| On July 15th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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That is so sad! She doesn't know what she's missing out on. |
| On July 15th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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i agree...that's too bad, incredibly sweet poem though. at least you're getting inspiration out of this i suppose. |
| On July 15th 2008 misha9944 Said : | |
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She doesn't know what she's missing out on. |
| On July 15th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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aww thats so cute, I wish a guy would write me a poem :) |
| On July 15th 2008 libshitz197 Said : | |
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wow. that is deep. i think it is the most emotional poem you have written. i ABSOLUTLYLOVE IT! |
| On July 15th 2008 LovisaJoy Said : | |
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sad...gripping...true...very good! your poems are so emotional and good! i wish i could write like you! |
| On July 15th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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Wow. Raw and profound and well written. it reminds me of a poem that one of my guy friends wrote. Seems there's a plague of unrequieted love in guys. Or is it just me?~L |
| On July 15th 2008 luckyleo819 Said : | |
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dude...this is amazing...it kind of reminds me of me and the guy! |


