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I'm not really sure about this one....Rate this Poem
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I Hope To Call You My Baby |
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So this is what it's like |
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Our Dreadful Decisions |
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To Love You For All Eternity |
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Drowning Without You |
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My Hearts Desire |
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Blissful Oblivion |
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Let's Do It Right |
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A Leaf Fallen |
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Unappeasable Love |
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I'm Here To Stay |
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The Pain That Is You |
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Stop and Think |
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Forever Together |
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Stop Treating Me Like A Slave |
Drumbeats, Heartbeats.
I'm walking towards you,
drumbeat sounding in the distance.
You look at me and our eyes meet,
drumbeat sounding louder and closer.
I take your hand look in your eyes,
two drums beating now.
I kiss your lips and tell you i love you,
the drums are beating so loud now.
I grab you up and spin you around,
the drums oh how beautiful they sound.
You giggle and smile in delight,
still the drums are beating yet where does it come from?
I let you down you kiss my lips, so fierce so passionate,
I put my hand on your heart, you put yours on mine.
The beating is coming from within,
A beautiful symphony of you and me.
Brought about by love, created by our hearts.
It brings tears to my eyes,
for i never thought to find a love like this.
My only wish is that it will last.
For many drums will wear and die.
I fear this will happen.
For my heart sounds so beautiful,
when it is beating along with yours.
| On August 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww this is great! sorry it took me so long to comment it, I've been very busy. Great poem btw! :) |
| On July 26th 2008 discolover55 Said : | |
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i really like it! so real yet everyones' fantasy. |
| On July 14th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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beautiful (: |
| On July 13th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Because it's not really my usual style. |
| On July 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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well im not sure why ur unsure about this...seems good to me. |
| On July 13th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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this is my ALL TIME FAVORITE!!! it is different in the effect that the girl you are in love with...loves you too!!....i love this one ALOT!! thank you for telling me about it!! keep it up!!! |
| On July 12th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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I love it! This is my favorite! Amazing job! |
| On July 12th 2008 LaineyX Said : | |
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This is most def. my favorite. I love it! |
| On July 12th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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wow just amazing ^^ like all your other stuff :) |
| On July 12th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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Wow my friend, once again, splendid! you have a unique perspective on the subject of love and it is quite refreshing from the paper-cut-out poems that we've all grown used to. Quite a maverick in this sense, bravo.~L |
| On July 12th 2008 xsafetypinx Said : | |
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holy. wow. this is too amazing for words. by far my favorite. you need no advice for this one kidd. i love it. xD. |
| On July 12th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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i love the line 'a beautiful symphony of me and you' it's amazing, and i love the metaphor!! |
| On July 12th 2008 libshitz197 Said : | |
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wow i feel the passion and emotion in this.. who ever you are witing about is very fortunate. |


