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When I Dream Fantasy Becomes Reality
I painted your picture,
in the backs of my eyes.
So that when I sleep,
You're always in my dreams.
I've walked with you hand in hand,
Along the most beautiful beaches.
I've swam with you,
unto the deepest recesses of the sea.
When i sleep you always grace my presence.
When i dream fantasy becomes reality.
Your name my soft lullaby.
Always easing me into peaceful slumber.
Oh how i hate to wake up.
For when i do I leave my dream world.
I hate reality and loathe returning to it.
For in reality you will not accept me.
In reality your heart is cold and unreachable.
I always relish the chances to sleep.
For when i dream fantasy becomes reality.
| On July 17th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Aha i play soccer thanks. Football is boring. :] |
| On July 15th 2008 IDRRFGTDR Said : | |
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THIS IS GAY
GO OUTSIDE AND PLAY SOME FOOTBALL LIKE A MAN |
| On July 15th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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no not at all :] |
| On July 15th 2008 instantGhetto Said : | |
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is it weird if I say I know what you mean? :/
you're very good. [: |
| On July 14th 2008 luckyleo819 Said : | |
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wow....im speachless...this was awesome |
| On July 14th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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loved it... |
| On July 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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another sensation i know all too well. you're good at this poetry game. |
| On July 13th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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This was so beautiful. :] Definitely something deep going on here (duh)~ |
| On July 13th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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awwwwwwww.....i love this alot... it makes sleep feel so good....you are really really awesome!!!! gosh that girl you talk about sure is super lucky, but she just doesn't seem to see that!!! great job!! |
| On July 12th 2008 JamiiCage Said : | |
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I think I'm in love with this!?!?! This is one amazing peice with ALOT of depth |
| On July 12th 2008 paramore119 Said : | |
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i love it |
| On July 12th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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Very, very good my friend, I enjoyed this one immensesly, and that girl would probably be flattered to have this written about her. Again, bravo!~L |
| On July 12th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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for when i dream fantasy becomes reality, loved that line ^^ love your poem :) |
| On July 12th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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it's so sweet and amazing, i love it!! |
| On July 11th 2008 LaineyX Said : | |
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I really like this one. Your poems are always amazing. |
| On July 11th 2008 xsafetypinx Said : | |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe. i was so right. thanks for cheering me up about my candycane with it x]. your amazing. xD. |
| On July 11th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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I really like it! It's so sweet. Awesome job! |


