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Would You Let Me
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Created on 7-7-08
Would you let me fall right into you?
Would you let me softly kiss you?
Well baby it is my greatest fantasy.
To stand by your side.
To have you in my life.
Would you let me fight for your heart.
Would you let me protect from the dark.
Baby it is my wonderful dream.
To have you in my arms.
To possess your heart.
Would you let me whisper in your ear.
Would you let me tell you i love you.
Please Login to post comments| On July 14th 2008 Babydotz Said : | |
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Again.. Very sweet
I wish I could write something like this instead of tragedies sometimes... |
| On July 12th 2008 libshitz197 Said : | |
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wow. amazing. i would so let you. you are an amazing poet and you sound like a very sweet sensitive guy. |
| On July 12th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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this is so incredibly romantic, great job!! you could probably sell these to other guys for some serious cash...lol. |
| On July 7th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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WOW.....*blushes* this is a tender poem that I'd imagine reading by a fire, haha. You've got a way of wrangling words here, and I'm glad I read this one! Keep it up, you'll have gals melting in no time, haha.~L |
| On July 7th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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well, yes i would! ahaha jk. ur such an amazing poet. (: |
| On July 7th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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well, yes i would! ahaha jk. ur such an amazing poet. (: |
| On July 7th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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well, yes i would! ahaha jk. ur such an amazing poet. (: |
