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Without Your Warmth

Views (112) Pain Created on 7-4-08 Flag

I am walking this razors edge.

One false step and i may tumble to despair.

Oh how i miss loving you.

Oh how i miss talking with you.

Playing this solemn wrist violin.

The pain is my only escape.

So I'm just gunna get fucked up again.

Hoping it'll relieve my misery.

Do you feel the love emanating from me.

Do you feel the love in my words.

I don't think you do.

Every night and everday.

You're the thought that's here to stay.

I just wish i never said those words.

'Cause you meant so much to me.

Now the hole in my chest.

Is a silent testament to my despair.

The blood flows freely.

My hearts not beating.

For without your warmth.

My life has no meaning.

 

 

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On July 21st 2008 emoathiest Said :
emoathiest i can relate to this perfectly good job...
On July 15th 2008 mandiepandie93 Said :
mandiepandie93 wow, idk wat to say...lol i loved it, i could feel the emotion as i read it. great job!! =]
On July 12th 2008 LovisaJoy Said :
LovisaJoy sadness much? but it was really good! i love the way you word things!
On July 12th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX i love the ending, it really packs a punch.
On July 6th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I love this. A lot.
On July 5th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said :
MaraLicious177 not good? i think not, i really love your style, so talented
On July 5th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 this is how i feel soooo depresed i hate life but i loved your poem
On July 5th 2008 Calypso32 Said :
Calypso32 "playing this wrist Violin"....raw, that was so.....profound, even if it made me sorry for the pain that you're in, or suffered through to be able to write this. I wish you'd check out my poems, All of yours have an caliber of pathos that I admire and strive to achieve in my rhetorical creations. Thank you for keeping me posted about yours.Blessings.~L
On July 5th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia wow, whoever this is for, is one lucky girl.....this si very sweet and i love it
On July 4th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 oh my......this is so sad......i really hurt for you when i read this poem....i just felt so....sad....like i was the person who did all that to you....and i wanted to say i am sorry....but i am not the person who should be telling you that....lots of emotion....its nice....