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Sorrowful Tide

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Valuable possessions, money, and the finest foods.

All of it means naught, if you are not by my side.

I've been blinded by my obsessions.

Unaware that the one that truly means something.

Has been standing there all along.

Like a mirror you reflect away the light of my petty obsession.

Allowing me to see you in all of your splendor.

So much time wasted i could have spent with you.

Now i fear i may be to late.

For you have moved farther down the road of life.

While i am still here stuck behind this tide. 

Broken beyond repair, lost without reason.

Is that you in the distance?

I fear i may never catch up.

Am i now condemned to a torturous life.

Where i can see a happy life with you.

Taunting me as i make my way through this sorrowful tide.

It's a daunting task, that will push my determination.

Test my love and make me prove myself.

I will push my way through this tide.

Yet time it will take for it is strong.

Trying to pull me away from you.

Yet in the end i shall prevail.

For i will not allow myself to perish forsaken and alone. 

You shall see, that my love can overcome.

The most daunting and burdensome obstacles.  

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On July 12th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX i know the feeling of being left behind, great job of describing it.
On July 5th 2008 instantGhetto Said :
instantGhetto It's very well written; I like your vocabulary. [one problem: "Now i fear i may be to late." that should be "too" not "to". ;D]
On July 2nd 2008 lardpiles Said :
lardpiles cool. i can tell you put a lot of thought into it.
On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x oh snap! your vocabulary is amazing... I'm speechless Great work! :)
On June 28th 2008 LovisaJoy Said :
LovisaJoy i've said it once and i'll say it a million more times! your poems are sooooo deep! they're full of emotion!
On June 28th 2008 ddiana3 Said :
ddiana3 wow. this is amazing. awesome. great job. =) Diana keep up the good work.
On June 28th 2008 Kidojidoari Said :
Kidojidoari The way you write is so amazing. I love it. :D Your talent is indescribable. Keep up the good work~ ^^ Sad, but beautiful in every way. :]
On June 28th 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight I love your choice of words. This had a very good feeling to it. :D
On June 28th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said :
MaraLicious177 your words are so powerful, i love itvery good. :)
On June 28th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly Thanks all of you I'm glad you like it.
On June 28th 2008 HannieJo Said :
HannieJo i am a big fan!!!
On June 28th 2008 HannieJo Said :
HannieJo this is really, really, really, really good. you write a lot of poems about being heartbroken, and i feel bad for any girl who's ever rejected you...
On June 28th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 This is amazing. If that's how you really feel then you will overcome the obstacles, and she is missing out big time. This has to be one of my favorites that you have written. Well done.
On June 28th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Great job. Your way with words tastes of romance.
On June 28th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia Wow,you do love her that much.very nice...It's an excellent poem...
On June 28th 2008 gabylove08 Said :
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wow dude this girl is really missing out! if this is how u really feel u are an amazing guy...im completely WOWED
On June 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 if you love her that much...i agree you will overcome all the obstacles...this is a beautiful poem. LOVE it!!!!!!!!! you are a very good writer....!!
On June 28th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ Wow, this was amazing :) I admire your writing skills. Keep up the good work!