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My Lacerated Soul

Views (210) Pain Created on 6-26-08 Flag

I am chained to this chair.

And you are beating me.

Lacerating me to my very soul.

With you words like a red hot poker.

Why are you so angry with me?

Why do you hurt me so?

All i did was proclaim my love to you.

All i did was try to convince you.

That it was no lie.

That it wasn't something i made up.

Oh how i am crying.

But not from the pain.

The pain i can endure easily.

No it's your rejection that makes me cry.

For that seems to be the only gift i receive.

When i proclaim myself to another.

Oh how i wish i could just be loved.

But no longer will i tell of my love.

For my lacerated and destroyed soul.

Will not allow me to do this to myself.

So i will sit here taking all of you're words.

Without flinching, without crying out.

My tears the only silent testament.

To the torturous pain i feel within me. 

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On July 24th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 simply unique. beautiful words
On July 17th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ Wow, this was amazing . Great Job!
On July 12th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX wow, the imagery is amazing, i love it!!
On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I can relate to this one a lot... I love it!
On June 30th 2008 kitkat298 Said :
kitkat298 it's really good. i can't write poems like that.
On June 27th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia wow,i understand and went through this feeling also....very nice an excellent job
On June 26th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 awww this is so sad. im sure everyone who reads this can relate. i no i do. very good job and very deep.
On June 26th 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight I love the content of this poem. You can tell what you were or are feeling. Whether it is the situation explained or if for some reason you're chained and can't let your true self out, you did great explaining. I like your style of righting, but maybe you could try using caesura or enjambment. :D
On June 26th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 Incredible. This is so beautifully written. That was probably one of the better poems I've read on here. Great job.
On June 26th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Dear, you must first journey to find yourself in order to ever be successful with another. I learned that the hard way, with a boy I dated for a little less than two years. Sometimes your heart just isn't ready to hold all of that. You can want it with all your heart, but you have to be ready for it to work. I understand what your feeling. So completly. Great job putting things into words.
On June 26th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said :
xX1ncINalifeXx it's amazing and i totally agree with angel2k11, sorry you have to go through this...
On June 26th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 awwwwwwww......i know how it feels....but you took it to a whole other level...of locking the pain inside....don't worry....someday...someday all that pain will go away...but if it still hurts....you always have people like ME! teehee....just talk to me...giving the pain to someone who understands, will help ease your LACERATED SOUL....this is a wonderful poem...full of emotion....i love it! keep it up!!!!