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Just writing this on the fly at 2:09AM

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I suck at poetry

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I wish I was good at poetry,

I could tell wonderous stories...

Stories of old friends,

Stories of poor washed-up war-veterans,

Stories of why the night is more soothing.

 

Oh the things I have seen...

the exploding snowflakes,

the deceased in gift-wrap,

and passions that could kill.

 

But I suck at poetry.

 

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On July 1st 2008 Andrack Said :
Andrack XD no comment
On July 1st 2008 goodgurl8504 Said :
goodgurl8504 You wrote this one on the fly? That poor fly...
On April 29th 2007 twistedgrrrl23 Said :
my picture
LOL.
On March 5th 2007 isdrowning Said :
isdrowning awww.. andy you don't suck that was a spiffy poem and keep in mind, this is coming from a writer
On January 21st 2007 eatyourself Said :
eatyourself its a good freeverse, it doesn't suck, though i would like for you to elaborate on those subjects you mentioned