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lossing myself

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my life is so empty,

lost without a soul,

no one to love,

nothing to live for,

a lot of pain,

a lot of guilt,

to many words spoken that Brock my dreams,

they do not know that I am already dead inside,

but they still pick and pick at my thoughts,

trying to bring me downer and downer to the ground,

when I already fell like dirt,

I always look up to the heavens hoping to go there soon,

I always yell out take me now,

take me from this pain,

i don't want to be here,

i don't want to live,

this life i have sucks,

pleas take me now,

but I have not been answered,

so I live like a zombie,

with no life inside,

with no emotions at all,

no thoughts,

only tears,

and cries.

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On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic wow, this is intense... i lovee it though especially towards the end
On January 20th 2008 ILYALBLM Said :
ILYALBLM does this poem have some reflections of yourself or did you just write this to capture a deep thought and emotional feeling for the reader?
On January 20th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 Love it....sounds like your having it rough...just keep your head up gurl, I'm here if you need me!
On January 18th 2008 saenz14 Said :
saenz14 very good poem so emotional
On January 17th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 tell me what you think ♥
On January 17th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 tell me what you think ♥