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time and time again |
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WHAT WE SEEN WITH OUR EYES |
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what life gives and what it takes |
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forgetine you |
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MY LOVE |
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Drip Drip |
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lossing myself |
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NEW LOVE |
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WORDS SPOKEN THROUGH A BROKEN HEART |
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A FALLEN ANGELS CRIES |
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TORN BETWEEN FEELING'S |
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SHE SEEM SO SAD |
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YOU ARE JUST ANOTHER VOICE IN THE WIND |
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BREAKING DOWN |
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CAN YOU HEAR THE CRIES |
lossing myself
my life is so empty,
lost without a soul,
no one to love,
nothing to live for,
a lot of pain,
a lot of guilt,
to many words spoken that Brock my dreams,
they do not know that I am already dead inside,
but they still pick and pick at my thoughts,
trying to bring me downer and downer to the ground,
when I already fell like dirt,
I always look up to the heavens hoping to go there soon,
I always yell out take me now,
take me from this pain,
i don't want to be here,
i don't want to live,
this life i have sucks,
pleas take me now,
but I have not been answered,
so I live like a zombie,
with no life inside,
with no emotions at all,
no thoughts,
only tears,
and cries.
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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wow, this is intense... i lovee it though especially towards the end |
| On January 20th 2008 ILYALBLM Said : | |
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does this poem have some reflections of yourself or did you just write this to capture a deep thought and emotional feeling for the reader? |
| On January 20th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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Love it....sounds like your having it rough...just keep your head up gurl, I'm here if you need me! |
| On January 18th 2008 saenz14 Said : | |
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very good poem so emotional |
| On January 17th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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tell me what you think ♥ |
| On January 17th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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tell me what you think ♥ |


