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Drip Drip

Views (141) Pain Created on 1-16-08 Flag

DRIP , DRIP IS ALL I HERE AS THE BLOOD RUNS DOWN MY WRIST,

DRIP , DRIP WHAT HAVE I GOT LEFT TO LIVE FOR,

DRIP , DRIP I CAN FINELY BE FREE FROM ALL THIS PAIN,

DRIP , DRIP  A BROKEN HEAT IS BEATING INSIDE,

DRIP , DRIP MY BODY FEELS SO COLD,

DRIP , DRIP AS I START TO CRY,

DRIP , DRIP  WHY DID IT HAVE TO COME TO THIS,

DRIP , DRIP AS I START TO FEEL SCARED,

DRIP , DRIP WHAT HAVE I DONE,

DRIP , DRIP I AM FEELING SO SLEEPY,

DRIP , DRIP I CHANGED MY MIND,

DRIP , DRIP I DON'T WANT TO DIE,

DRIP , DRIP SOMEONE PLEAS HELP ME,

DRIP , DRIP I DON'T WANT TO GO,

DRIP , I CAN FEEL MY HEART START TO BEAT SLOWER AND SLOWER,

MY BLOOD IS ALL OVER THE FLOOR,

I CAN HARDLY SEE, I FELL SO WEAK,

IT'S TO LATE FOR.

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On February 24th 2008 blackrose1094 Said :
blackrose1094 very emotional. love it.
On February 24th 2008 blackrose1094 Said :
blackrose1094 very emotionaly. love it.
On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic i agree, this poem is very creative. its sad though :( good job
On January 20th 2008 ILYALBLM Said :
ILYALBLM I like your usage of words. the "drip drip" is very creative in a writers sense. Not too many think of that.
On January 17th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 i like it...I feel like enf=ding it for myself sometimes...thankfully I don't! but If you ever need to talk....I'm here! Really good!
On January 16th 2008 saenz14 Said :
saenz14 nice poem , very good
On January 16th 2008 Transience Said :
Transience Drip drip... Suck suck... Someone got... To mop you up. Read in entirely... As Forest Gump. Drip drip... Suck suck...
On January 16th 2008 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 WOW! Sounds really good! Love it!
On January 16th 2008 NisaNicole Said :
NisaNicole I love it. Deep! ♥♥ it.
On January 16th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK