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life is conffusing sometimesRate this Poem
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time and time again |
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WHAT WE SEEN WITH OUR EYES |
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what life gives and what it takes |
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forgetine you |
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MY LOVE |
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Drip Drip |
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lossing myself |
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NEW LOVE |
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WORDS SPOKEN THROUGH A BROKEN HEART |
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A FALLEN ANGELS CRIES |
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TORN BETWEEN FEELING'S |
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SHE SEEM SO SAD |
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YOU ARE JUST ANOTHER VOICE IN THE WIND |
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BREAKING DOWN |
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CAN YOU HEAR THE CRIES |
what life gives and what it takes
Life gives us sunshine,
flower,
happynes,
the will to live,
power,
most of all love.
Life gives us many things,
we give back what we can,
what is it that life is so wonderfull,
is it the air we breath,
the food we eat,
the weal to see,
the sweet smell of roses,
the sound of laughter.
Life gives us many things,
most of all life gives us the power to give life to children,
to set a future with no problems or worries,
to raise them with good manners,
and to give them the best knowlege we can give.
WHAT LIFE CAN TAKE MOST OF ALL IS LIFE IT'S SELF,
IT CAN TAKE OUR SIGHT,
OUR HEARING,
OUR TASTE,
OUR POWER,
OUR GIFT OF GIVING LIFE,
OUR KNOWLEGE,
AND OUR HAPPINES.
Some people take life for granted,
we should live life to the fullestas if it were our last day of living,
I know now that life mybe slow but not many people get a long life at all,
life gives and life takes many things,
we should give as much as we can back,
because were would we be without life.
bye, Ana Alicia Saenz
| On January 14th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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i like it, but life also gives us the bad, poverty, abuse, RAPE, murder! I have my eyes open, this world suks! but I like the way you wrote this! |
| On January 13th 2008 DragonsFlight Said : | |
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so true!! beautifully written!! |
| On January 6th 2008 ILYALBLM Said : | |
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Aw! |
| On January 3rd 2008 BeckysLilCuz Said : | |
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i LiKE THiS POEM iT iS SOO NiCE..............YEAH
:-)8-) |


