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This is about a school shooting.Rate this Poem
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Unprepared
A man came into school today,
And most of us were blown away.
He lined us up against the wall,
And started shooting at us all.
Some were shot in the head,
They were first to fall down dead.
Others were shot in the chest,
They fell down with the rest.
I survived I don't know why,
I just watched my friends and classmates die.
We never thought it could happen to us,
Now look who's making the biggest fuss.
Look at how we fared,
Because we were unprepared.
| On October 10th 2007 AmiottDe Said : | |
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It wasn't really a teacher who did it. It was just a person off the streets who was angry and took it out on a bunch of school kids. |
| On September 14th 2007 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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This reminds me of a dream I had one night... Talk about a crazy teacher though.. |
| On August 14th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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cool rhythm and an unusual subject. good poem
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