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Evil Galaxy
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Created on 7-19-08
Blood falls in the dark.
Space has been torn.
People live in fear.
The galaxy is evil in this part.
Demons rule in the torn space.
Vampires have a parade.
Everything evil can be found.
This is the start of the downfall.
Downfall of every living (dead) thing.
Stars are being destroyed.
Light failing, things are dying.
The darkness starts to invade.
End of days: Now Here.
SPACE IS EVIL IN THE START OF THINGS
Please Login to post comments| On October 17th 2008 darediva551 Said : | |
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that is incredible i like the reference to vampires cuz i love them.. adn the light is failing things are dieing to me is way metaphorical... your a genious:) |
| On July 30th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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terror. :0 I liked how you used the death of light to illustrate darkness' depth. |
| On July 26th 2008 kitty6593 Said : | |
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AWSOMENESS 1 of the best poems ive ever read |
| On July 20th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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nice ^^ |
| On July 19th 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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i like it a lot |
| On July 19th 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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I like how you brought mythical creatures into it. |
