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Candles standing one by one in a line.Rate this Poem
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Created:
10/03 2007
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458
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Candles & Darkness
Candles standing one by one in a line.
Candles burning side by side lasting time.
Candles going out one by one start to say goodbye.
Candles falling two by two souls now begin to die.
Darkness failing in this hell.
Darkness hears a crystal bell.
Darkness towers crack and tell.
Darkness towers have now fell.
Candles in the darkness start to die.
Darkness takes over the immense lie.
Candles being taken to another cell.
Darkness towers fall, the ground turns to jell.
Please Login to post comments| On October 6th 2007 stics917 Said: |
| i love your style |
| On October 4th 2007 browneyes33 Said: |
| good Job!! |
| On October 4th 2007 sochula777 Said: |
| Great poem keep up the good work! |
| On October 3rd 2007 Jizzlenator Said: |
| I love the rhyme scheme and how you alternated between Candles and Darkness. |
| On October 3rd 2007 madmarcus Said: |
| Yeah I was gonna say that sounds like chanting Arch angel dark angel lend me thine light lead me from deaths doors till heavens in sight. (cradle of filth) |
| On October 3rd 2007 nolenkatie Said: |
| Kind of sounds like a spell. I like the imagery. |
